Hey Thanks Zakken for the reply, I will, and am goign to, right now, get to work on this. I imagine when you said 10 to 12 sections, you were wanting the former and not the latter (10), So I will try to do this or as I would say to an employement person. This will be shortened up and fixed, no questions asked. I did feel however that sepearating certain things like Dev comparing Bones was special and could be left on its own, but I admit, I considered the reader, but not,as much as I should have. If anything, I will have this rewrite on your desk by the morning. Any other sessions will be apreciated.